Matt,
Your Okwata with a peaked deck or multi panel deck would be very similar in size and profile to a Contour sea kayak made by Perception in New Zealand. I think a very similar boat is marketed under the name Carolina by Perception in the US and Europe.
These are one of the most popular and versatile smaller sea kayaks in Australia.
I think Okwata will yet prove a winner, particularly so, if you re-draw the decks so as to be not so intimidating. easier for the builder and cheaper for you to post - win win
I am told, somewhere between 16 and 17 feet is about the ideal length for a solo kayak re effort to propell verses resistance through the water. I would suggest compromise here, ie as long as you can get with just one panel splice per panel.
I would also suggest a minimum of 3 panels per side for the hull, that is one bottom panel and two side panels. Again this is a compromise. Two panels per side boats can look a bit slab sided to me and of necessity, create a very hard chined boat.
I think your concept, back channel boat, as she is drawn right now would appeal to many. Particularly the intermediate and recreational paddlers who like to venture into rougher waters sometimes.
Have a look at the huge variance of styles of sea kayaks around. I don't think there is one boat that will suit every or even most tastes.
This is where your boats differ to all other designers I have come across. You actually listen to what your builders want and then try to create something that will work for them.
Mate, you know that I have a couple of boats that I just have to build first

but I believe in your back channel kayak. Such a boat will be a winner with recreational, open water paddlers here. I would encourage you to run with this design first - see what sort of feedback you get and modify or improve it if it needs it. I don't think it will need much refining, if at all.
I am so convinced of the merrit of this particular boat, -pretty much, as is, that I am very happy to run with it as a custom order. I have mentioned this before and the offer still stands mate.

any time you feel so inclined, just say the word and the check will be in the mail.